Dear Nina, Elena, Marta, Sara and Marigny,

 

looking at your wiki page is a real pleasure. Your work really does what it's supposed to do, which is providing information on the University systems in Italy and in the U.S. The short introduction on your work is sufficient.  

 

You made a clear table of contents in which every title gives a clear idea of what you will talk about in that section. In particular, we like the table of comparison between the two systems at the end. In that way it's very easy to understand and read your wiki page and to have an overall summary of what has been explained more in detail on your page.

 

Your texts are all coherent.

 

The language of your wiki is definitely adequate: The sentences are not too long and give clear information.

 

In our opinion, the page is well-balanced in terms of space for each country. You put an incredible amount of references which can always be useful in order to get further information on the topic, and your bibliography, too, is very helpful for the reader.

 

The language is clear. As far as we have noticed there were no grammatical mistakes.

 

In the section "financial aid" you used two different sizes for the letters. As we couldn't see any differences of the importance of this section you might consider to decide on one size only.

 

In your table of contents there are the sections "USA/Italia" and "Le Tasse": Maybe you just haven't had time to finish your wiki, but if you're not going to elaborate something on this topic/section you should take it out of the table of contents because it might be confusing for the reader.

 

You did a very good job!

 

 

 

 

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