HI Group 12,

 

we found really interesting reading through your wiki. We think the topic you chose is very recent and above all, as you all are students, it looks like a sort of "autobiography".

 

Although we know it's not your final work and you need a little bit more to organize the last things, the structure seems to be complete. You just need to write something as a conclusion in order to sum up what you already spoke about. We think you could make a list of the greatest differences you noticed between American and Italian University life. It's just a suggestion!

As far as the introduction is concerned you could already list all the four/five subtopics you're going to develop.

 

We'd liked the fact that each subtopic is organized through comparisons. This makes the reader more induced to read the wiki, because they just have to look for the issue they're interested in, without reading the whole page. Moreover it's much easier for the reader to understand differences and common aspects between the two cultures.

 

Probably you're going to add more pieces of information in the next days. What we suggest to you is trying to balance the different parts, in the sense that it's nicer to see whether they have more or less the same lenght. We noticed there are parts which are longer than other, (and other obviously who still have to be developed). Just to give the idea of a more omogeneous work!

 

We remember to put a list of references at the end of the wiki! Don't forget about it!

Good job!

See you all in class!

 

Caroline Witte

Roberta Fumani

Giovanna Sperotto

 

 

 

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