Does it do what it’s supposed to do? This would depend on whether or not there is an Introduction. If there isn't one, should there be one? Is there a table of contents? There's not a table of contents, unfortunately the page has not been completed yet. There should be an introduction as well, although the topic is quite clear from the title. It is slightly evident that the page is still under working, so that we cannot give a definite peer review.
Is there a comparison or are there conclusions? No, there isn't.
What do you like about it? (be specific) The images are representative and it does not seem a too long-winded wiki page, so that, when completed, it will probably be easy to read.
Is there cohesion? Yes, there is, just with reference to the parts we've read and which are available so far.
Is it relatively easy to read? If not, what could the writer do to make it easier for the reader? Yes, it is easy to read, short and focused on the main topic.
Is there balance and parallelism? There's parallelism in the part we read.
Is referencing done correctly? There 's no bibliography, no reference to the pages the images are taken from and no footnotes.
Are there parts that appear that they should be referenced, but are not? Yes, there are.
Are there enough links to outside sources? No, there aren't enough links to outside sources.
Length - are the paragraphs too long? too wordy? The paragraphs written so far are short, which may be considered as a strong point in the wiki page, because it is easy to follow.
Structure - is there a clear structure divided into paragraphs? No, there isn't yet.
Is there any use of multimedia? Actually, not so much, just a couple of photos.
Are there sentence fragments or any run-on sentences? No, there aren't. But there are parts which clearly have to be completed.
Are the verb tenses used correctly? Yes, they are.
Are there words that need to be checked for spelling? No, we haven't found any. However, the first paragraph is clearly written by the Amercan student of the group, and should be corrected a bit by the Italian students because there are some mistakes (as there will surely be in the parts in English written by Italians, this is undoubtful).
Are the beginning of sentences and proper nouns capitalized? Yes, they are.
Do sentences have appropriate ending punctuation? Yes, they do. However, some sentences need to be finished.
Is internal punctuation (comma, colon, semicolon) used appropriately? Yes, it apparently is. However, it is always difficult to say whether punctuation is used correctly, but there are no evident mistakes.
Are pronouns used correctly? Yes, they seem to be used correctly.
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