Contents and Organization

 

Does it do what it’s supposed to do? This would depend on whether or not there is an Introduction. If there isn't one, should there be one? Is there a table of contents? There is a clear table of content which introduces what we are going to find in the page, nevertheless wethink that a brief introduction coul be useful.

Is there a comparison or are there conclusions? There are icomparisons between Italy and USA as far as news, reality shows and shows for jung adult is concened but there are not conclusions.

What do you like about it? (be specific)  We like this page because the topic is interesting; as a matter of fact everyone watches television and so we all face daily this programs.

Is there cohesion? Yes there is cohesion

Is it relatively easy to read? If not, what could the writer do to make it easier for the reader? The text it's quite easy to read because the sections are well divided and so it easy to understand what we are goin to find.

Is there balance and parallelism? Yes there is, even though some sections are provided with videos whereas other don't.

Is referencing done correctly? There are just few footnotes but maybe because a lot of information came from each one experience and not from on line sources.

Are there parts that appear that they should be referenced, but are not? Did you take all the information from the two sites of the ffot note?If yes that's fine, otherwise put the other sources!

Can you find any instances of plagiarism? No, nothing seems to be plagiarized

Are there enough links to outside sources? Yes there are!

Length - are the paragraphs too long? too wordy? They are fine

Structure - is there a clear structure divided into paragraphs? Yes

Is there any use of multimedia? Yes, there are some videos from youtube and other channels

 

Language

 

Are there sentence fragments or any run-on sentences?  No

Are the verb tenses used correctly? yes

Are there words that need to be checked for spelling? No

Are the beginning of sentences and proper nouns capitalized? Yes

Do sentences have appropriate ending punctuation? Yes

Is internal punctuation (comma, colon, semicolon) used appropriately? Yes. Anyway chek it again because there are some little mistake like for example in Fox news channel's section ("attention grabbing" and, they =no comma)

Are pronouns used correctly? Yes

Is the appropriate vocabulary used? Yes

You are encouraged to intervene directly on the pages you give peer feedback on if you see particularly evident language mistakes!

We think that you have to say at the right time and not in the right time but we are not sure, check it!

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