Contents and Organization

 

Does it do what it’s supposed to do? This would depend on whether or not there is an Introduction. If there isn't one, should there be one? Is there a table of contents?

We really like your wiki page because it is well-structured. It actually does what it is supposed to do, but maybe you should write a more exhaustive introduction.

Is there a comparison or are there conclusions?  We noticed that you haven't already made the comparison between America and Italy for each point, so you might do it. On the contrary we've seen that at the end of your wikipage you have a title called "final summary" and we suppose you will put there your conclusions.

What do you like about it? (be specific) We really appreciate the use of tables to make the information more clear and the use of lots of images and videos. These features catch the reader's attention and make the reading more pleasant.

Is there cohesion? We think all texts you wrote are cohesive.

Is it relatively easy to read? If not, what could the writer do to make it easier for the reader? We consider your wiki page relatively easy to read because you use short sentences and simple vocabulary and there are many tables.

Is there balance and parallelism? We noticed that you compared the three topics from both the American and the Italian point of view, so we can say there is parallelism.

Is referencing done correctly? We think referencing was done correclty in those parts where it is already done.

Are there parts that appear that they should be referenced, but are not? We think that in some sections you haven't do referencing yet but you will probably do it soon..

Can you find any instances of plagiarism?There are many parts which can be considered plagiarism because it's clear that you have taken the information from external sources, but we think it's only because you haven't finished yet to do footnotes.

 

Language

 

Are there sentence fragments or any run-on sentences? We haven't noticed any sentence fragments.

Are the verb tenses used correctly? All verb tenses seem to be used correctly

Are there words that need to be checked for spelling? We haven't found any word that might be wrong

Are the beginning of sentences and proper nouns capitalized? Yes, they are

Do sentences have appropriate ending punctuation? Yes, they have. In one sentence we don't understand why you put the reference 6 after the full stop. Does this reference refer to the previous sentence or to the following one?

Is internal punctuation (comma, colon, semicolon) used appropriately? Yes, we think it is

Are pronouns used correctly? Yes, we think they are

Is the appropriate vocabulary used? We think it is relatively formal and therefore appropriate.

You are encouraged to intervene directly on the pages you give peer feedback on if you see particularly evident language mistakes!

 

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