Contents and Organization

 

Does it do what it’s supposed to do? This would depend on whether or not there is an Introduction. If there isn't one, should there be one? Is there a table of contents? There is not a table of contents. Maybe you should add it and write a longer introduction.

Is there a comparison or are there conclusions? The comparison is present throughout the whole page but the conclusion is not written yet.

What do you like about it? (be specific) We appreciated the huge amount of information and the videos. Also the constant comparison between Italy and America is very interesting!

Is there cohesion? Yes.

Is it relatively easy to read? If not, what could the writer do to make it easier for the reader? The text is easy to read.

Is there balance and parallelism? Yes.

Is referencing done correctly? There is only one reference at the moment (But it is correct).

Are there parts that appear that they should be referenced, but are not? We don't think so.

Can you find any instances of plagiarism? No, the text seems to be original.

Are there enough links to outside sources? Yes, maybe they are too many! Probably a reader will not look at all your links, you should select the most effective.

Length - are the paragraphs too long? too wordy? No, they are short and clear.

Structure - is there a clear structure divided into paragraphs? Yes. The structure is also outlined at the beginning of the page.

Is there any use of multimedia? No.

 

Language

 

Are there sentence fragments or any run-on sentences? No

Are the verb tenses used correctly? Yes, at least in our opinion.

Are there words that need to be checked for spelling? We found only one, goign instead of going

Are the beginning of sentences and proper nouns capitalized? Yes.

Do sentences have appropriate ending punctuation? Yes.

Is internal punctuation (comma, colon, semicolon) used appropriately? Yes, it seems correct.

Are pronouns used correctly? Yes.

Is the appropriate vocabulary used? Yes, especially in the English part. Maybe the Italian part is a little bit repetitive.

 

 

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