Dear colleagues of ours, how are you?

Your page is fairly nice, but actually it lacks a practical table of contents. We think that a/the reader would find useful a table of content on your page.  We also think that you should not say what you are going to do but just do it; we did not understand when you say 'Here, I think we can analyze the image ecc...'.

Your paragraphing is a bit uneconomical, in the sense that the eye gets lost in reading the paragraphs so many they are. Your links should be shorter and with a little explanation of what they are about. Futhermore, we think you had better  group the links all together, we references to the text.

Basically, your page seems not to have a straightforward-intellegible structure.

Kind regards,

Elena and Nicola

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