Dear colleagues of ours,
your page is fairly nice, actually we noticed that you do not have a proper table of contents, ask Sarah for suggestion. As regards Section 'La gravidanza e il lavoro', dear Asheley, you could paragraph your text according to the idea you are dealing with. It would be ok if you put your links directly in the text to get it more multimedia-like.The language is fairly fine. There are only a few mistakes, such as: 'Per un esmpio autentico dei questi problemi, veda questa link' should be 'per ulteriori informazione vedere questo link'.
Kind regards, bye,
Nicola and Elena
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